Tornado.

Walht: write a interesting and enjoyable narrative.

Success criteria:

1. Plan.
2. Write the words for the introduction.
3. Write a powerful introduction.

Jack was wondering on the streets to try and find his friends but then he couldn’t find them so he asked everyone he knew. Everyone said that they had gone on a road trip. Jack was so sad he went to his friends backyard. He climbed up the ladder into the tree house. He tried making a potion to make him the biggest boy on earth. Once he was finished he tested it on himself and it worked. He climbed over the fence and went for a walk.

 

As he was walking he noticed it was starting to get really loud he didn’t like because it was making his ears saw. He went to the shops and sat on the chairs. He wanted a drink of water. He bought one and drank it really fast after that he went and looked for his friend at the camping area. After the camping area he walked to town.

While he was going to the shops he noticed weather was changing. It was a terrible weather, it was a tornado. As he was running to his car something flew right where his head was and it was a big piece of metal. Then he rushed to the motel to call ambulance because people were bleeding and a lot of blood was on the floor. He ran to the market and tried to buy medical staff but he couldn’t because they were closing.

When the ambulance came, they came and helped people that were injured. It was sad for the rest of them because they past away. Jack saw a dog and claimed it because it was dying. Lot’s of help came and they brought medical staff and the rest of the people got took care of.