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Friday 24 June 2016

Camp at Shakespeare:


WALT: Write a narrative:


Camp at Shakespeare:


One sunny morning Toli and her family went for a camp at shakespeare beach. She was very excited to go because she always loved the water, it had a beautiful colour of navy blue.


Once it started to get dark everyone was tired so they set up their tents and sleeping bags and fell off to sleep. Toli was the only one awake so she decided to go for a long walk on the sand. She squished her feet into the sand because that was one of the things she always loved to do.


A couple of minutes later she shook her shoes off her feet and started walking towards the water. Suddenly a huge wave pushed Toli down and she started to drown. She yelled help several times but no one could hear her. She then tried to swim but she couldńt. Toli thought that her life was ending. She didn't know what to do.


She thought to herself no matter what she does she will never be heard or seen. So as she was gonna let her life end she heard a boat coming close to her, so she yelled for help and the people heard her so they rescued her and took her to her family and she was safe.

In the morning Toli and her family had an wonderful breakfast they talked and talked until they felt like not talking anymore. After three hours they had a little picnic and then drove home safely.

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