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Wednesday, 1 June 2016

Allergie Poem:

Allergie Poem:

When you sneeze.

You start to wheeze.

Your nose turns red and get itchy.

Children get allergic reactions.

Which makes a huge distraction.

It makes parents worry

And they feel very sorry.

3 comments:

  1. Talofa lava Natalia
    I like your poem. I did a poem about Allergies but it is different to yours. Keep the good work up. Was it very difficult to write this poem?

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  2. Hello Nataliya

    I thought that your poem was amazing and I made one too but mine is different to yours.I Think that your one is much better.I hope that you can make a lot more so that I can comment on more.

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  3. Hi Natalia

    As I was reading through your poem I could see a lot of rhymes in it. This was a very descriptive poem that told a lot about allergies.Can you write another one like this but with a different topic ?

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